Before I started turning the script for Eternity into Flash, there was a lot of work done on each chapter.  As a team, we went over each of them, constantly editing and re-writing every detail, until we had a final draft for each one.  This is what you end up reading in the Flash.  But I still have the original scripts laying around...

So, J-Pop and I thought it would be kind of fun to share some of the original drafts with everyone.  They're not that special or anything, but you can read the comments that we sent back and forth to each other.  You can also get an idea of the work that goes/went into writing and editing the story.  I have made some very small changes to them (things like removing our names), but they're essentially unaltered.  So, there'll be a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes.  Make sure that you read the disclaimer that I've written in them.

The original drafts for Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 are currently available.  I may add others later, though.  All drafts are in .rtf format, which opens with Microsoft WordPad.

Chapter 1 - The Night of the First Farewell

Chapter 2 - Forgotten Promise

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

Chapter 7

Chapter 8

Chapter 9

Last updated on July 26, 2009 09:25 PM